Tuesday, July 3, 2018

cats vs dogs

Hi bloggers today we have been doing persuasive writing about why cats are better than dogs and
dogs are better then cats. I chose cats are better. we are learning to choose our opinion.
Here is my writing.

Cats are better than dogs for pets because they are smart and playful and clean themselves.

They are cute and they can catch mice and rats so they don't kill the lovely smell of your house.
They have been known for killing snakes. They know their way around your house so they don't
get lost. Some cats get lost because it is probably the first time they have explored around the
house. because they are kittens and they don't have that much experience around it. But if you
let them grow up in that place and each day put a lead on them so they don't get lost and walk
them round the house so they can get to remember around, when they go free without the lead
they know that is their territory and they stay in it. They can protect it so no other cat marks it as
their spot. Cats are playful when you get home because they have had a long day without you
so they probably have been sleeping all day so that's the time to get all of the energy out




Cats are better because they are playful and cute and clean them self.




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2 comments:

  1. Hi Apollo, Blake here from Awahono School. I like your writing because you have written about cats and dogs. In my opinion I would choose cats over dogs because I have a few cats at my house and no dogs. Maybe because your blurb is a very hard to read I had to highlight your writing to read it. Maybe you could check out some of my writing on my blog here: https://paparoarangeblakeg.blogspot.com
    Kind Regards
    Blake ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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  2. Hi Apollo, its me Lachlan from Awahono School. I like your writing about cats are better then dogs. I think you should edit your writing so it does not go over the page. Maybe you could check out some of my learning on my blog, here is the link to my blog https://awahonolachlanm.blogspot.com/
    Kind regards
    Lachlan

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